Things of Dreams

by Vox   Oct 23, 2008


Underneath the stars,
I dance in my dreams.
Looking for answers,
To all kinds of things.

Oh, why am I here,
Of places to be.
Where do we come From,
Why not can I see?

To become so lost,
In the vast Great Sea,
Is so a sad fate,
Familiar to me,

And so...

Underneath the stars,
I dance in my dreams.
Looking for answers,
To all kinds of things.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua Lee

    I like this one! clever. Your other poems have a similar rhythm to them, using the same type of english.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Nice poem but I would change some of the wording around a little. It would make it sound and flow better. I still gave it a 5/5 though.

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    Short. but such nice rythem to it. not many people can pull off a poem with nice rythem. so many kudos<3

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