Comments : Things of Dreams

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    Short. but such nice rythem to it. not many people can pull off a poem with nice rythem. so many kudos<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Nice poem but I would change some of the wording around a little. It would make it sound and flow better. I still gave it a 5/5 though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua Lee

    I like this one! clever. Your other poems have a similar rhythm to them, using the same type of english.