Wow...WOW! Kait that was amazing! The story you told was such a heartbreaking one but I loved how there was a happy ending. I hope this isnt from personal experiance or taken from real life, and if it isnt then wow your imagination is amazing! Everything about this was flawless, it all flowed so nicely and I didnt even mind the length. It felt as if I knew this person because you described his inner battles so nicely.

Its so sad to see how people lose themselves to drugs because they are loved or appreciated by others. People think that money will make them happy and this is a perfect example of what money can do for people. It makes them numb and wish to escape their hell like reality to a place where everything makes sense. I was so happy to see this guy fight through his demons and stand victorious at the end. Very well written.

The seven deadly sins:
Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Sloth,
Wrath, Envy, and Pride.
Three of which
Have my name
Written across their chests.

^ Wonderfully written and so unique!

Well done and thank you for sharing.
*5/5*

This piece was just so interesting. Truly, I enjoyed this piece so much. The length was not bad at all, it is long but the storyline of this write just has the reader so attached to their seat not wanting to leave.. I just kept wanting to know what was going to come next. I don't have any clue what inspired this piece, but lets just hope its not from a real experience. Anyways, your imagination is beyond amazing.. I was quite impressed with what you came up with here. If this wasnt written from a real experience.. then girl.. you have a ton of imagination.. to come up with a mind-blowing piece such as this one. This piece started out pretty dark.. but towards the end you realize that it was so worth the read.. because this guy you write about has overcame his addiction and thats not always easy to do in life.. especially one involving drugs. This piece was soo interesting, your imagination was amazing in this write, and I hope you try to let your imagination flow into your pieces more.. because I think that this piece was very well done.

Wow.. this is definatly a piece everyone needs to read.
5/5.