Comments : Runing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Paiger

    Love the idea of this poem, the line
    "Run, and not stop,
    until I was far away.
    I couldn't let my pain
    catch up."

    I have really felt that before like you need to do something to distract you and take you from your pain, but when you stop your pain catches up with you.

    I really like how you broke up the lines, it really makes you take your time, and take in every line.

    Great job and keep up the good work