My poetry

by StonedGooberz   Oct 24, 2008


Here I go again spilling my emotions
for you to understand as you read
opening myself once again for my love
for all of my incomprehensible needs

Crawling out of my uneducated mind
I bring forth my thoughts with digital ink
It’s all confusing in the beginning
this thing called poetry is harder then you think

Reworking the fabric of my imagination
tearing out all of what I can feel
searching for some sort of idea
that can help me begin to heal

Yes that is what these words are truly for
whether or not you critique it to your fashion
these will always be my emotions people
and this being I call poetry is my passion

I have begun anew as I worked through my past
and solved some of my misplaced ideas of living
because no mater how bad I seem to get
I always will have something worth giving

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I can tell this poem is based on true experience

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    I really enjoyed this one too...
    It was great.
    powerfull
    I relate... =]
    i like the reality.
    good job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Beautiful. i can tell just by this one poem that you adore poetry, using your emotions to power the strength of the words making the reader wish it to be longer. the second paragraph needs to be fixed. you used "it's" and it shows up as something else so i think you should change it to "it is" or "tis" or somewhere along those lines. very nice job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by No one

    Nice =)

    I like it, and it's very true to yourself. Just fix a few spelling mistakes at it'll be fab.

    Love you always darlink
    xxxxx

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