Nice =)

I like it, and it's very true to yourself. Just fix a few spelling mistakes at it'll be fab.

Love you always darlink
xxxxx

Beautiful. i can tell just by this one poem that you adore poetry, using your emotions to power the strength of the words making the reader wish it to be longer. the second paragraph needs to be fixed. you used "it's" and it shows up as something else so i think you should change it to "it is" or "tis" or somewhere along those lines. very nice job. 5/5

I really enjoyed this one too...
It was great.
powerfull
I relate... =]
i like the reality.
good job
5/5

I can tell this poem is based on true experience