Comments : The nature of a broken heart.

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow! i can imagine it in my mind..
    so sad. but i love the ending..
    nice job..

  • 15 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    Great imagery..
    really awesome how you painted this picture for the reader..
    awesome poem..keep up the good work. :)