I'll Write For You

by HidinVictim   Oct 24, 2008


I'll write for you one more time
Watch my tears smear these lines
I remind myself I'm fine
& your memory I'll loose in time.

I'll kiss you one last good-bye
Maybe one final time
Prove I'm stronger than my blade
I remind myself that I'm OK

I'll whisper your name one night
To show I won the fight
Your eyes no longer blurs my sight
I remind myself I'm alright

I'll write for you one more time
Write for one last good-bye
Whisper your name one night
Show I'm still putting up a fight

I close my eyes to the light
Tell truths to all my lies
Surrender to this fight
I remind myself I'm alright

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  • 15 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    "I'll write for you one more time"
    You might like this instead:
    "I'll write for you one last time"
    It sounds better to me.. I don't know.

    "& your memory I'll loose in time"
    should be
    "& your memory I'll lose in time"
    (you also might want to spell out AND)

    "Your eyes no longer blurs my sight"
    should be
    "Your eyes no longer blur my sight"
    If "eyes" wasn't plural, you'd be right, but because it is, you need "blur" to be singular.

    "Write for one last good-bye"
    You might want to get rid of the "For" since there's already one in the line above.

    Other then that, this was great! Good job.
    5/5

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