Awe a really heart felt poem and so sad hun. Well written, pulls you in all the way to the end. |
by jessie
I am sorry for the loss and can relate to it it helps though to write about it so keep it up. |
A truly heartfelt poem, obviously missed very much, but it is so true only the good die young he only taked the best truly lovely poem |
Though i cant say i know a thing of your pain,i recently lost family too, sorries from strangers have always been empty in my eyes, and there is never a reply befitting of those empty words. stay strong. |
Such a strong and well-meant poem. |
by Nobodys Hero
This is a very sweet way of placing your feelings and memories into a poem. Nice job I thought it was an emotional and heartfelt piece ^^ |