by John Long Oct 24, 2008
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Tattered ribbons of black plastic |
by Melissa
I love this! How you write so deeply in such a down to earth manner is captivating. I adore how you ended this poem with "just is", it's perfect! :) |
by Corinne
A philosophical snapshot. Deceptively simple, yet very powerful in the spaces between the words. |
by Jackie
Very good poem, I like the wordage, |
by Ingrid
John, |