Ill be strong

by dirtyhands   Oct 25, 2008


Oceans apart,
miles away
feeling's depart
can't make it stay

done with the wind
love, wanting
blown away
lost in the grave

heart's fainting
mind's blowing
feeling's drowning
crazy thingking

but...

still i'll stand
be another one
wait the right woman
make another man

on you im done
the pain has gone
better alone
look for fun

i'll be strong
sadness wont last long
just give me some time time
Cause, to you,I dont belong..

tnx joyce for inpiration xD
hope you like it
rate and coment please for improvement
tnx

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Nice work! Very well written. Keep it up this was awesome!. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CourtneyyContageous

    Awh this is so sad, but It's so good at the same time=)

    Keep it up!

    -CourtneyyContageous.

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hi i read your poem and quite enjoyed it , though i would drop the comma after love 2nd stanza and thinking was spelled wrong otherwise i like the fast pace of the poemand the style too .
    Well done

    Grant

    PS: I like your picture if you go look at mine you will see my new bike.LOL

  • 16 years ago

    by ReinaPuente

    Ah i loved it, that was amazing as i was reading it, i could really feel your emotion.

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