Ah i loved it, that was amazing as i was reading it, i could really feel your emotion.

Hi i read your poem and quite enjoyed it , though i would drop the comma after love 2nd stanza and thinking was spelled wrong otherwise i like the fast pace of the poemand the style too .
Well done

Grant

PS: I like your picture if you go look at mine you will see my new bike.LOL

Awh this is so sad, but It's so good at the same time=)

Keep it up!

-CourtneyyContageous.

Nice work! Very well written. Keep it up this was awesome!. 5/5