by Baby Rainbow Oct 25, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Do you hear my silent cries? |
by Brookie
This sounds a lot like a fight between you and someone (assuming a boy, or maybe a close friend :3) that you care about, The questioning in it is interesting because there are not many poems that are just question after question after questions... I think it adds a little to the character of the writer (you at 14) and it makes it seem more childish (which probably sounds bad but i love the innocent that reeks from it) 5/5 |