:O This is powerful in the way that you don't really realize what its about till the very end. I loved it, the repition was a little extreme, but in the end because of how it was tied together i believe it worked quite well.

I have a friend that is dying to cancer and its always a pain in my heart that just destroys me... One day i hope she will be cured and will forever be able to have the smile on her face that she deserves, but life is cruel. We shall see.

Some of the lines (the killer is a murderer) feels kinda redundant - killer = Murderer xD if that makes sense haha