Very sweet... I like it.

Content wise, this is a sweet poem. This piece shows that you are wondering what will happen if only you show that girl how you feel for her.

and also it shows your love for her. That you can't live without her.

but I do have a critique and that's the repetition, it's a bit overuse. So what it does to my head is that it makes my head focus on the lines What would you do.. and that's good because that's the whole point of the poem and what it was intended, though, if it's over use I lose focus of the rest of the poem.. and I just think about that line.lol

Aside from that, I like the content.

And since this is an old poem, I just wanted to say that you have improved so much.