I Will Be Your Limit

by Baby Rainbow   Oct 25, 2008


You killed my Gran
You killed my granddad
Will you kill my angel too?

You killed my mum's mum
You killed my dad's dad
There is no way of stopping you!

You have no limit
You have no feelings
Killing is your only goal

I wish you would try and kill me
So i could fight and beat you
And if I lose I die
But if I win you will die

Saffie
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  • 9 years ago

    by Brookie

    I'm assuming this is about your friend who had cancer??

    This is sad if all these people in your life had passed to cancer, I could only imagine the pain that you held in your heart back then from all the things that seemed to be happening in your life.

    This poem had a lot of repitition, it shows just how powerful your foe is with the "there is no way of stopping you!" comment. The ending stanza makes me so sad to hear because you were so young when you wrote this... Im glad you never were attacked - Im happy you're alive