Forever

by Jes   Oct 25, 2008


I lay my head against your chest
And hear the steady beat
Nine months down the road
The sound is still as sweet

You make me feel safe
I feel so loved
A love like this
Has to be from above

You send shivers down my spine
Spirals of joy in my heart
All throughout my life
Loving you is the best part

You make tears come to my eyes
When your not here
Feelings so desperate
I want you always near

My body becomes whole
When I'm joined with you
No matter what you think
There is no wrong you could do

Your my life, my everything
My breath and my soul
My existence, my angel
My only love, my whole...

Please comment so i can know how im doing. Thanx

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  • 14 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    I can relate to this

    good write 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    I love the flow of the poem and the emotions of love you expressed.
    I like the first stanza
    "I lay my head against your chest
    And hear the steady beat
    Nine months down the road
    The sound is still as sweet"
    and I equally as much liked the last stanza
    "Your my life, my everything
    My breath and my soul
    My existence, my angel
    My only love, my whole"
    Very well thought out, 5/5. Em x

  • 15 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is a reall great poem. I can truely feel the emotion and the kind of love you too share. A sweet love you pure and true. This was brilliantly penned.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Very powerful and emotion filled. i loved it. great diction as well. Keep it up. Shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    Wow! 1102 views and no comment? Well I have wrrriiittteeerrsss BLOCK so the comment won't be that great.
    This poem has great emotion and you did good expressing yourself! :)
    Great Job!

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