Wow! 1102 views and no comment? Well I have wrrriiittteeerrsss BLOCK so the comment won't be that great.
This poem has great emotion and you did good expressing yourself! :)
Great Job!

Very powerful and emotion filled. i loved it. great diction as well. Keep it up. Shanik

This is a reall great poem. I can truely feel the emotion and the kind of love you too share. A sweet love you pure and true. This was brilliantly penned.

I love the flow of the poem and the emotions of love you expressed.
I like the first stanza
"I lay my head against your chest
And hear the steady beat
Nine months down the road
The sound is still as sweet"
and I equally as much liked the last stanza
"Your my life, my everything
My breath and my soul
My existence, my angel
My only love, my whole"
Very well thought out, 5/5. Em x

I can relate to this

good write 5/5