I Continue To Fall

by Baby Rainbow   Oct 25, 2008


I'm still thinking of you
Still missing you everyday
Wishing I could see you
That I didn't give you away

What would we be doing now?
If you were still with me
Probably in the park playing
Watching what you've grown to be

I remember all the tricks you done
But you probably forgot them all
You held my world together
But now your gone I continue to fall

Saffie
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  • 9 years ago

    by Brookie

    I really liked this poem - though i felt that the ending might of been slightly weak. its about someone you love being gone and how life would be if they were still there in your life and i can relate to this. Daily i wonder what we would be doing if we still talked daily, and other friends i wonder what we would be doing at that moment if we were still friends.

    Like i said, im alwaysa a fan of rhyming xD I've always loved it... So.. Yeah....

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