Comments : I Continue To Fall

  • 9 years ago

    by Brookie

    I really liked this poem - though i felt that the ending might of been slightly weak. its about someone you love being gone and how life would be if they were still there in your life and i can relate to this. Daily i wonder what we would be doing if we still talked daily, and other friends i wonder what we would be doing at that moment if we were still friends.

    Like i said, im alwaysa a fan of rhyming xD I've always loved it... So.. Yeah....