I Gave Up My Right

Awe This is so sad and the heartbreak that was felt in this is devistating... This reminds me of an animal that might of died, with the mentioning of "that decision wasn't their right" and it makes me so sad (when my animals died i was so distraught i had no idea what to do)

The last stanza has no rhyme to it whule the others ones do which threw me off a little but is fine, You seemed to like the word Cos when you were 14.. All in all this is a very sad write...