by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX Oct 26, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You left my heart broken, |
by HidinVictim
Aww this is so sad, I can really relate which makes it very touching to me. Anyways this is a very nicely written piece, the flow is amazing!! the first stanza is a great opener, and the last two lines are a perfect ending, although i might suggest putting this under a different genre maybe 'lost love' or something |
Oh hell i love the ending there. the wya you did the ending simply astounding i was not expecting it at all. in the 3rd stanza 4th line i would change it 2 " by the anwers i can't gain" |
Wow! It's of the nicest poems ever.. I love it 5/5 |