Dear doctor

by Baby Rainbow   Oct 26, 2008


Dear doctor i was sent to you
for the burns along my hands
i tried to explain it you
but as usual no one understands

dear doctor you accused me
i hurt myself you thought
you frowned at me and shouted
and some cream was all i got

dear doctor don't you care?
that there are monsters hurting me?
your the one with my files and notes
now take a second look and tell me what you see

saffie
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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Alot of doctors don't realise what's infront of their eyes. Well written, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    I dunno wat to say but its something great , MONSTERS "<3> ." how to escspe from life

  • 16 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Wow. All these authority figures must be blind :( This is pretty good. I like the message you are trying to send, and I think this one is one of your best! 5/5