A wish upon a star

by Baby Rainbow   Oct 26, 2008


She writes a suicide note tonight
wishing on the star shining so bright
oh please don't let him hurt me
oh please don't let this be
i cant go through this pain
being raped again and again
please open up someone's eyes
to comfort all these children's cries
she hears his footsteps and he opens her door
all alone she whispers please uncle no more
the star flashes bright up in the sky
blinding the sight from her uncles eye
the knife he found next to her note
slips out his hand and cuts her throat
on her way to heaven she thanks the star
as all her pain fades into a scar
now she is free this angel above
she can be happy and experience love
but how much suffering do you need there to be?
for you to open your eyes and see
will my message be clear to you
or will another child have to die too

saffie
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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Very, very sad. A wonderful yet emotional piece, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by sarahjayne

    I was raped for 3 years by my uncle & i often felt suicidel but i knew he would win if i was too....i finally told my mum after 2 years of my uncles dissapierance and she went crazy we got the police involved and nothing could be done as there could be no evidence....5 month ago we had a phone call askin for me...my uncle had video's of himself raping me they was found on a drug raid...hes now serving 15 years in prison and i hope the cunt dies!!!!...........sorry to write this but i cant tell people how i feel or whats gone on but this poem has really just opend up my eyes x x x

  • 15 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    Aw, my uncle rapes me too.
    :( wonderful write.

    you are added to my favourite authors.
    i read your poems every day.

    5/5 =)

  • 16 years ago

    by XxxYour broken angelxxX

    Wow.That was truly amazing.Im literally speechless.It sucks that kids have to go thru that.I have a friend whos been thru it.Couple actually.It does suck.It leaves them in a really bad stage.I hate it.These guys whould be put in jail for what they do.They r sick bastards. 5/5 amazing job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    This is so sad...Hun, u have got to be easily, one of the best poets yet, No sh*t u truy are. This is amazing, flowed perfectly and ur wording was deep and, heartbreakingly true. Things like this just shouldnt be happening. Love ur writes, keep it up. 5/5 xox

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