Haha, i quite like this one, xD

good job x]

I liked your choice of the words you used here. Very nice. very peaceful to me. It was not too long or too short - just right. some poems drag on forever - a few of mine have I'm sure. This one though made the grade in my book. very good - I'll be looking forward to more.

I love this! it's perfect! i loved the words you used! please read/ comment some of my poems???