A very eerie write here! a Halloween treat ! Great job Cindy!

Now thats scary, i didnt expected such peom from u, am shocked... ;)

awesome one, thrilling, great words and

Amazing imagination.

loved the poem, all the way

keep on surprising us

Oooooo - You scared me! :-O

NOT!

Cute, Cindy

Hell fire licks at your feet and toes
Blisters forming from their touch
^^^
I love these 2 lines and the imagery they created ...

Mauahahahah Happy Halloweenie my friend ...
Loved this read
Lu

LOVED IT!

This was really good :) i enjoyed it. It was quite a pleasant surprise, because i always read poems with good title, and they usually aren't well written, but i really enjoyed this one.

Very enjoyable. Good description makes it really interesting. Well done!

This is a very creative piece of work, thank you for sharing it with us. Happy Halloween.

Sadaddy

WOW!!! That was amazing....perfect for halloween...
good job!!!..
5/5

This is good poetry, love what you've done here.

Wonderful poem great twist love it!