Beautiful *a dedication to Soso*( Pleiades)

by Ingrid   Oct 26, 2008


Beautiful (Pleiades)

Beautiful bird of paradise, pure gentleness flows from you
Bringing sweetness and kindness into so many lives
Blessed was the day we met, so many months ago
By and by we got to know each other through and through
Being close to you brings so much joy to my heart
Best of everything is what you deserve and what I pray for
Born an angel, may you be a beautiful bride one day

Dedicated to one of the sweetest people on this site, my dear friend Samia aka Soso.

A pleiades is a poem consisting of 7 lines. The title has only one word and each line must start with the first letter of the title.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aww i hopes you let this person read this!!!!! you do a great job of making your poems unique like you dont use the usual writing technique i love it : ) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was a very beautiful friendship poem. I know Soso as well and you described her very well. She's an angel and cares about everyone and anyone. Amazing write, great dedication. Very thoughtful poem. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Birds of paradise, !!

    a bird symbol of fredom , happyness, peace , and many others, you combined them with paradise, witch is the most desired place for a person ,
    and you put them both arround one person SOSO , he must be an exceptional angel to fly arround you ingrid , and mean soo much to you and influence your life and your thoughts and sight

    the poem is perfect in structure , and the flow and the emotions are soo clear , soo i enjoyed it !!

    but i would give this poem a rhyme (call me rhyming maniac ) althought it is not required

    excelent work!

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