by Baby Rainbow Oct 26, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
All your life you have been silenced |
by Jay Perry Jr
I love this poem. Its good how you tell people who have been abused they arent alone and can recieve help. Good write. :) |
by Em
Wow, I loved this poem so much because of the message it portrayed that violence is preventable and that people who are being beaten are not alone. My sister was beaten by her ex and she stayed with him awhile until he started hitting his own daughter and then she left. It doesn't just hurt the person being abused it hurts their families too. Well written, 5/5. Em |
by Juanita
That is extremely good. Great use of words and I love how you put the help inside the poem. Really good! |
Wow very inspirational. I too was abused as a kid so I can I relate. Great stanzas and keep up the good work kiddo! =) |
by Kimberley
Omg omg omg!!! that was so amazing i just dont know what to tell you. that was... really something. i love the emotion in it and the raw power your words spoke. 100/5 (if thats even possible) |