Comments : Don't Stare

  • 15 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    This part was my favorite:
    "Look away.
    Forget you have seen my scars.
    Go live and laugh
    Don't waste your time.
    Please look away while I cry.
    It's killing me more inside.
    Please don't stare."
    Very nicely worded poem. The message that came across to me was one that I think needs to be learned more often. Flow was brilliant. The first through third lines also were heart-touching. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    The last stanza was my fave too. it was amazing and i can relate to it. wonderful job. keep it up. 5/5. ~KM~

  • 15 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really deep poem..
    And really good.
    5/5.