This part was my favorite:
"Look away.
Forget you have seen my scars.
Go live and laugh
Don't waste your time.
Please look away while I cry.
It's killing me more inside.
Please don't stare."
Very nicely worded poem. The message that came across to me was one that I think needs to be learned more often. Flow was brilliant. The first through third lines also were heart-touching. 5/5
15 years ago
by Kimberley
The last stanza was my fave too. it was amazing and i can relate to it. wonderful job. keep it up. 5/5. ~KM~