Caged For Life

Descriptive word after descriptive word you captured the image of this person beautifully. Their facial features put into beutiful detail, with added lines, afterthoughts as if your mind wandered off while thinking of this person. This description captivates the audience, your strong feelings imediately seen.

And the ending, was yet another great part of this poem. This poem didn't have the ending I had expected, caged by your lovers charms. It was interesting, different and full of beautiful emotions. 5/5

Awww this was adorable!! clever though to !! the words were not cliche or boring or generic in any way they were very very complex but used to get across an adorable feeling you have for this person!
the only thing i would ever suggest is making the lines somewhat the same length ! it might help with the flow a little !!

5/5

The flow was outstanding. It reminded me of works I've read by Edgar Allen Poe.Very deep and emotional.

In the night upon a day's fight
Thoughts of you,
Brought warm feelings.... Across the freezing nights
Leaving images of love in its path.

These were my favorite lines, They were so powerful and they really tied it all together. 5/5
Great job

(I can see the forming tears)

i like this line...... great poem....
a new piece. well i like this poem
i havd a gd read.......

(To such beatific face,)

i like this line as well
i really like the way u write.......
5/5 for this. ;)

Again, the way you describe every moment is so meticulously done and creates such a beautiful piece.

Your tiny eyelashes,
Replicate the whole lot about you
A destined beloved half,
Joyous the heavens, now that we reunite.

this was my favourite.

keep up the good work :)