A pretty empowering write, indeed.
when i read the line about the refrence to green eyes, i was like .. YEAH! lol

*ahem*
i like what you've said in this poem and how you've said it,,

"..Green; the color of nature.
The color of the way things are supposed to be.
Months ago, they were grey.
Painted by a hand misguided by lust and betrayal.."
-i like how you painted the picture here.nicely compared the two.
"..painted by a hand misguided by lust and betrayal.."
Superb

"..I had no boundaries, no love lines, or life lines.
So I drew my own.
I do not fret, or try too hard to hide the scars that I have made.
That would be hiding myself from others.
I am proud of what I have become; whole.."
-as i said before, a Very empowering write this, and inspirtaional too.love how you describe it.

"..I am no longer the broken girl that hurts herself because she cannot hurt others.
I have become the girl strong enough to show people who she is
and not be afraid of being judged.
I am who I am.
No one will change that.."
-powerful words, simply said.thats how it is. and thats how it should be.great work

a very inspirational write, this.
Keep that head up!

~Wake~

A pretty empowering write, indeed.
when i read the line about the refrence to green eyes, i was like .. YEAH! lol

*ahem*
i like what you've said in this poem and how you've said it,,

"..Green; the color of nature.
The color of the way things are supposed to be.
Months ago, they were grey.
Painted by a hand misguided by lust and betrayal.."
-i like how you painted the picture here.nicely compared the two.
"..painted by a hand misguided by lust and betrayal.."
Superb

"..I had no boundaries, no love lines, or life lines.
So I drew my own.
I do not fret, or try too hard to hide the scars that I have made.
That would be hiding myself from others.
I am proud of what I have become; whole.."
-as i said before, a Very empowering write this, and inspirtaional too.love how you describe it.

"..I am no longer the broken girl that hurts herself because she cannot hurt others.
I have become the girl strong enough to show people who she is
and not be afraid of being judged.
I am who I am.
No one will change that.."
-powerful words, simply said.thats how it is. and thats how it should be.great work

a very inspirational write, this.
Keep that head up!

~Wake~