Zack Sandman

You are talented. I enjoy reading reading so much your poems. It always left me thinking...
Life is filled with struggles , yet at times most can be overcome easily. Very strong message. It merits 5/5. i like it, kel

I thought this was sweet. The advice is great also. I liked it! Great!

Oh, this was so beautiful! I loved the words that you used; they were so powerful. It was honest and I can see that you really care for your great-great-nephew. He's lucky to have somebody like you in his life. :)

"Though few may follow the word to the letter"
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Awesome lines here. It kept me thinking actually of how many times one tends to overlook the power of "words".

What I loved most is the last stanza. I have heard people using "grains", but "sands of time "is totally something- vast and unpredictable. And the message in the last two lines has been penned down beautifully.

Great message of inspiration. You know the young ones have a problem thinking of consequences, their frontal lobes aren't fully developed yet. We can hope, they don't do too much they will regret until the executive judgement kicks in! Nice job on the poem!