The Walk Alone

by rainbowliciouz   Oct 27, 2008


Rain pouring down
shattering like glass
hitting me in the face
just like my ugly past

Standing in the rain
the storm growing stronger
looking in your eyes
seeing us no longer

Turning to walk away
as clouds start to show
my eyes swell with tears
as the wind starts to blow

Staring at the road ahead
slowly taking it in
falling to my knees
wondering can my heart mend

I get back up and turn
looking for a trace
maybe just a glimpse
of your beautiful face

I don't see anything
so I finally know
that I must finish
this walk alone

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  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderful write. The flow of the poem was good, but could of been better with some puncuation. I can't stress it enough, puncuation is a big part of making it flow better as well the overall structure (which in your case is good except for the fact you have no puncuation)

    Overall I good write, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

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