Comments : The Walk Alone

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderful write. The flow of the poem was good, but could of been better with some puncuation. I can't stress it enough, puncuation is a big part of making it flow better as well the overall structure (which in your case is good except for the fact you have no puncuation)

    Overall I good write, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe