Peaceful Sleep

by rainbowliciouz   Oct 27, 2008


Laying on the rooftop
soaking wet with rain
wondering if ill ever
see your face again

I see you every night
when i drift off to sleep
why cant this be over
so there can be some peace

In my dreams at night
were running through the rain
don't you miss the old times
don't you want this again

Never thought the day
would come and id say this
please come end my life
so there wont be any more of this shit

I'm done lying awake
at night screaming for you
you don't understand
what i now have to do

I'm walking away from life
so say goodbye right now just let me get some peaceful sleep
I'm taking my final bow

Its done and I'm over it
These are my final lines
I love you and Ill dream of you
As I'm peacefully sleeping tonight

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  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Again I can't stress enough that the use of puncuation is important in poetry. It tells the reader when to pause or stop, as well as strengthing the overall flow and structure.

    I liked the rhymes, and the overall flow of the poem, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

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