Missing a little to late

by Milla   Oct 28, 2008


Miss me.
No don't love me
Miss me.

I'm not asking much.
Just for you to miss me
and only me.

Don't caress me like
i want you to.
Just miss me.

Don't kiss me all tenderly and
send shivers down my spine.
Just miss me.

Don't whisper sweet words
into my ears.
Miss me.

Don't stare into my soul
and get inside my head.
Miss me.

Don't entwine our
fingers together and promise me
forever. No Just miss me.

I'm not asking much
I swear to god I'm not
Just learn to be brave and

Miss me like I'm
missing you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "Missing a Little Too Late." -Notice too is with two o's not one.

    "i want you to."
    `I should be capitolized.

    Well darling I think you got your point across to this person, and I think that's one of the main objectives while writing a poem. I honestly didnt like the repititon all that much, but if you get the point across to this person youre addressing & the reader.. then I think you did pretty good. The flow was decent actually.. uhmm.. I would have loved to see a wider vocabulary here.. but thats just my preference. :] Good job, I don't think that there was really any spectacular part that stood out to me here, which is why I have to give you a 4/5.. because it didn't really interest me completely. Sorry. ):

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