"Missing a Little Too Late." -Notice too is with two o's not one.

"i want you to."
`I should be capitolized.

Well darling I think you got your point across to this person, and I think that's one of the main objectives while writing a poem. I honestly didnt like the repititon all that much, but if you get the point across to this person youre addressing & the reader.. then I think you did pretty good. The flow was decent actually.. uhmm.. I would have loved to see a wider vocabulary here.. but thats just my preference. :] Good job, I don't think that there was really any spectacular part that stood out to me here, which is why I have to give you a 4/5.. because it didn't really interest me completely. Sorry. ):