I think this is one of ur best ones here. your feeling are soo deep. you emotions are so feel. I can relate to this and it brought memories in my mind. when i was with that special someone. they are beautfiul but yet deadly.. hehe i love the flow. the words u choose where great. it just beautiful and sweet. i love the whole poem. amazing job here. Keep it up!

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy