Comments : End This Life.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Actually aside from the taboo topic (which I write on myself) the poem itself was not all the bad, you had a good rhythm going and your word choice and expression was not bad at all. Sometimes that need to let off steam brings about our best work.

  • 16 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    It is good, trust me.
    Its fantastic; As yur poems usually are.

    :) Good Work :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    This is beautiful & very sad. I liked the flow, very well done from me. 5/5, Em