Reverie

by Beautiful Chaos   Oct 28, 2008


I wish to dream the day away
Lost in thought of yesterday
When tender lips caressed my skin
Drew me down and pulled me in

Those eyes that spoke of raw submission
Mind and body, requisition
Demanding hungers, unquenched thirst
Pounding hearts about to burst

Alas the ringing wakes my mind
I'm back at work and undefined
Within the crowd, just a face
A secret lust I can't erase

I bear the minutes, count the seconds
Through it all your memory beckons
Soon I'll race to be with you
Living what my daydream knew

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  • 16 years ago

    by IML

    The best one i have seen yet on this website.
    i really enjoyed reading this one and it made all perfect sense and it reminds me of my old memories.
    thank you!

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Heartfelt congrats on your win...beautiful poem with great sentiment and rhyme and flow awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This is an excellent write and very good flow. The words roll off your tongue with ease. Wonderful topic and evokes memories of years past.

    I think this is my favorite verse, because I can remember those days.

    I wish to dream the day away
    Lost in thought of yesterday
    When tender lips caressed my skin
    Drew me down and pulled me in

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The excellence is self evident

    great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats for a beautiful Poem....What a treat to see the weekly winners this week :)
    RTVW ROCKS!!!!!!!

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