"For your love moves me to do the things
That I could never do without your permission
Releasing all my inhibitions
To defeat the fear of the flame"

Such passionate, deep and beautiful words written here. This is so heartfelt, and this whole piece was filled with so much emotoin/feeling. I really like how you make the reader feel what you feel, and you seriously made this poem come alive. A very great poem to read, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever....