I'm not sure why, but I read this before and didn't comment on it.

I feel this poem is reprisents something more than just a 'collector' perhaps it's almost that little voice that is always telling you to do the wrong thing.

Either way it's a very good poem. I don't really feel that you should change anything or any advice for you on this poem. I think it's perfect the way they are.

Very cool. Nice idea for a poem.