Saved By A Stranger

by Poet on the Piano   Oct 28, 2008


I ran toward the ship's edge, out of breath, gasping for air,
Just wanting to escape this terror, this nightmare I had to live in.
Wasting no minutes, I swung my feet over the top railing,
And turned around to see before me the depths of the ocean blue.

A cold hand was placed on my shaking shoulder,
"Stop! Don't move. I'll get you down from there."
It was a young man's voice, containing fright,
My feet froze to the rail, and my heart raced faster.

"You're insane, don't step any closer, or I'll....I'll jump!"
I shouted out, my voice uncertain and unsteady.
He stayed firmly where he was, his hand still outstretched.
"Miss, I'm not the one about to jump off of this ship."

A silence followed, the waves swiftly splashing about,
"Don't make me have to come after you," he playfully spoke.
After those words, I surely stated, "you wouldn't!"
"You'd be surprised at what a good swimmer I am."

This man, this stranger, would want to save my life?
After he thought for a moment, his voice got serious.
"Listen ma'am, the water down there is ice cold, you'll freeze,
Wouldn't want a pretty lady like yourself to suffer that way."

I immediately blushed lightly, secretly flattered by his presence,
Shivering suddenly from a gust of wind, I remembered his words.
Reality struck me like a bolt of lightning as my eyes closed,
A whisper crept up behind me, "take my hand, you won't regret it."

Without thinking twice, I automatically grasped his soft hand,
"That's it, careful now, I've got you, I won't let you fall."
His comforting words seemed to heal the center of my heart,
As thoughts of earlier seemed to fade away, new thoughts emerged.

Once I was over the railing and standing on the main deck,
I glanced deeply into his creamy light blue eyes.
Entranced by their truth, as if he was hypnotizing me,
All other worries were forgotten, as time stopped for a second.

"Now that you're safely down, I can properly introduce myself,
My name is Jack, Jack Dawson. A pleasure to meet you miss."
His face was alive with expression, though trying to hide laughter,
"How do you do Mr. Dawson? My name is Rose DeWitt Bukater."

A little chuckle escaped from Jack's lips, eyes twinkling all about,
Clearing his throat he replied, "won't have to keep calling you miss."
I laughed quietly to myself, and felt this passion crawl out of me,
And the next moment, Mr. Dawson and I were strolling along the deck.

Based on the movie "Titanic" with Kate Winslet and Leonardo DiCaprio.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    I like this poems.It touches my heart when i reading it.

    Great work of literary art! (5/5)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyber Saiyan

    The writing itself was very good. The flow from sentance to sentance and stanza to stanza was great. It flowed more like a story than a poem though, which is not a bad thing, just different. The details were great and the descriptions were awsome.

    I am not a big fan of basing it on a movie though. It seems like you were just adding detail to something that already happened and calling it original. I think it would be interesting to take the situation and write about the OPPOSITE of what actually happened; if she actually jumped or fell. Thats just my opinion though, please do not take it negativly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Wow, very beautiful.
    Every word was perfect and the fact it was based on such an amazing movie made it even better. Your an excellent writter.
    5/5
    Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shadow and Flame

    Wow! This is an amasing poem. I don't usually see a style such as this. I like it. It is more of a story than a poem. Keep writing always and forever...

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice. As I read each line, I could hardly wait to move on to the next and was rushing so that I could get to the end to see what happened. It held my attention to the very last word.