by Poet on the Piano Oct 28, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I ran toward the ship's edge, out of breath, gasping for air, |
by Sumit Ojha
I like this poems.It touches my heart when i reading it. |
by Cyber Saiyan
The writing itself was very good. The flow from sentance to sentance and stanza to stanza was great. It flowed more like a story than a poem though, which is not a bad thing, just different. The details were great and the descriptions were awsome. |
Wow, very beautiful. |
Wow! This is an amasing poem. I don't usually see a style such as this. I like it. It is more of a story than a poem. Keep writing always and forever... |
by Sylvia
Very nice. As I read each line, I could hardly wait to move on to the next and was rushing so that I could get to the end to see what happened. It held my attention to the very last word. |