Oh it was a really good idea that you linked this poem to Titanic, I honestly diddnt see that coming.
It was a really enjoyable read =] Really great job i thought it flowed rather well and the heading suited the poem perfectly
^^ 5//5

How clever! I love what you have with the story, very good indeed:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid
ps: You keep writing too, lil missy:)

Very nice. As I read each line, I could hardly wait to move on to the next and was rushing so that I could get to the end to see what happened. It held my attention to the very last word.

Wow! This is an amasing poem. I don't usually see a style such as this. I like it. It is more of a story than a poem. Keep writing always and forever...

Wow, very beautiful.
Every word was perfect and the fact it was based on such an amazing movie made it even better. Your an excellent writter.
5/5
Keep it up.

The writing itself was very good. The flow from sentance to sentance and stanza to stanza was great. It flowed more like a story than a poem though, which is not a bad thing, just different. The details were great and the descriptions were awsome.

I am not a big fan of basing it on a movie though. It seems like you were just adding detail to something that already happened and calling it original. I think it would be interesting to take the situation and write about the OPPOSITE of what actually happened; if she actually jumped or fell. Thats just my opinion though, please do not take it negativly.

I like this poems.It touches my heart when i reading it.

Great work of literary art! (5/5)