Comments : Self Absorption

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    That was a good one
    I love your about-life poems..they're always full of wisdom.
    Reading this one I felt like I'm reading a famous poet's piece..you know when you feel like it's not written by an ordinary poet :)

    I'll owe some long days
    To fate and her charm
    For though I've done good
    I've also done harm

    I Loved this stanza best...it was truly well written, we've all done the bad and the good and one day we'll have to pay for everything.
    That held a beautiful meaning !!

    I've tasted fresh love
    Hearts, I've left broken
    Screamed for the truth
    Though left it unspoken

    This stanza was really beautifully written too, the rhyme here was perfect, though some words might be cliche.

    I felt good while reading this one.
    write on
    xx