by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop Oct 29, 2008
category :
Internet slang /
life, society
I send this letter to you satan, |
by yogi73
Nice flow, reads nicely. Definately a creepy proposal. well done |
I really liked this one! It shows how we would do anything to show a person our emotions even if it is negative emotions. i like how you describe it has selling your soul for power. i like it a lot! |
by Ares
You were right, it definitly very powerful and packed with lots of emotion. Still I find this kind of vulerability to it which is quite freeing when reading this sorts of poems. It's very hard to do and often it's subliminalt in that you're so obsessed with spilling out all this anger and all this hatred, yet adding this pinch of something vulnerable. |
Omg babe... |
by iloveHIMonly
Oh my gosh. That was intense. I could feel the rage and emotion you were feeling when you wrote this. Definitely understood the things you were feeling while going through this. Wow. Incredible. 5/5 |