YOU

by SweetGrief   Oct 29, 2008


Warmer than the sun, felt this sweet hug
colder that the ocean, this kiss seemed
deeper than the space, these hands lug
more than words, those eyes shrieked

hold my hand, show me what is unseen
hold me tight, don't leave me keen
you're an angel, upon the skies
you're the owner, of these sweet eyes

running without a trace
trying to forget this dulcet face
wherever I go I found this place
where I remember all of your grace

struggling to touch your hand
trembling when I feel your rustles
I draw your hands on the sand
then I can build it again when the wind hustles

blue skies turned to gray and gray turned to raindrops
falling passionately to cover your hair
embracing you softly to melt your pain
cause I love you, and I swear

running without a trace
trying to forget this dulcet face
and as I reach this old place
I feel all of your grace

Rate Rate Rate ! I wrote it so quickly as much as I dont know if it's good :)! but I need these words right now...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Aww this is a very sweet poem. The way you depicted it is just beautiful.With such simplicity itz juz creates this serene mood for me. It was realli such a delightful to read

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Well, it's very well expressed; and i like the way you praise yourself here.. ;-)
    "you're an angel, upon the skies
    you're the owner, of these sweet eyes"

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelie Adams

    I like it its goood real good