Life time lovers?

by Ingrid   Oct 29, 2008


Life time lovers
walking hand in hand
happy to be together
until the very end

Counting the stars
in the night time sky
wishing upon the brightest
one, way up high

Kissing and hugging
Love's sweetest game
Never growing tired of
whispering your name

Can love last a life time?
Or does it have to end?
Will it be that I love you,
until the very end?

Day dreams of happiness
I have had them all
It is hard to keep believing
with no one there to call

One of my club members, named Perfection, challenged me to write a poem that has a sad ending when you read it top to bottom and a happy ending when you read it the other way around. It ended up being minute poetry, I wrote this is about 10 minutes, lol!

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  • 16 years ago

    by sarah

    Very nice i really really loved it ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Lameez Petersen

    Beautifull 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    Very creative. i like it! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    I'm all bow down to the ground
    ur poems a is a masterpiece won hands down
    telling me u wrote it in 10 minutes
    i couldn't believe it that a beautiful poem was written in that time limit

    the flow was smooth
    i can feel the sadness and passion
    in your poetic love groove
    indeed this poem made me moved;) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by michael

    Very well writtin and especialy for in 10 mins
    i thought it had a good flow and the rhymes were good.
    5/5 from me:):)

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