Very well writtin and especialy for in 10 mins
i thought it had a good flow and the rhymes were good.
5/5 from me:):)

I'm all bow down to the ground
ur poems a is a masterpiece won hands down
telling me u wrote it in 10 minutes
i couldn't believe it that a beautiful poem was written in that time limit

the flow was smooth
i can feel the sadness and passion
in your poetic love groove
indeed this poem made me moved;) 5/5

Very creative. i like it! 5/5!

Beautifull 5/5

Very nice i really really loved it ^^