Broken

by rainbowliciouz   Oct 29, 2008


Lying awake
feeling the pain
of losing you
to someone i knew

Tears falling
death is calling
blood shedding
I'm regreting

Seeing your face
missing my place
wondering if this
was all a mistake

I'm broken in pieces
Torn in time
you lied to me
as you swore you'd be mine

Never listening
always glistening
bloody tears
giant fears

Watching you leave
wishing i could go
never knowing
if your ever going to show

Hoping you'll remember
that I love you
and I wont forget
You once loved me to

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  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Ahh!!! Maidison you are killing me, use puncuation! It is a must in poetry, it can totally transform a poem from just good to excellent.

    I liked the flow, each stanza was short and actually helped the flow which I liked. Good Job, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe